diff --git a/apps/www/src/components/IntroSection.tsx b/apps/www/src/components/IntroSection.tsx
index e494e5e2..ac7ba7a8 100644
--- a/apps/www/src/components/IntroSection.tsx
+++ b/apps/www/src/components/IntroSection.tsx
@@ -20,10 +20,9 @@ export function IntroSection() {
             {/* Body Text */}
             <div className="font-mono tracking-[-0.96px]! text-white text-sm sm:text-base lg:text-lg max-w-[713px]">
               <p className="mb-0">
-              Plano is a models-native proxy server and dataplane for agents 
-              that handles the critical plumbing work in AI  like agent routing and 
-              orchestration, comprehensive traces for agentic interactions, guardrail 
-              hooks, unified APIs for LLMs 
+              Plano is a models-native proxy and dataplane for agents that handles
+              critical plumbing work in AI - agent routing and orchestration, rich agentic
+              traces, guardrail hooks, and smart model routing APIs for LLMs.
               </p>
               <p className="mb-0  mt-4">
                 Developers can focus more on modeling workflows.